A
cloud
appeared
outside my door
The far rainbow smiled
Through the big window saw four more
The wind chimes rang,danced and turned to footprints on my wall.
cloud
appeared
outside my door
The far rainbow smiled
Through the big window saw four more
The wind chimes rang,danced and turned to footprints on my wall.
Nice one, nature always appeals to me. So luvd dis one! :)
ReplyDeletehashan, pratsie will be proud of you!
ReplyDeletea third fib?? :O wow, i don't even have one, i trying but the syllable management is problems for me! :)
lovely poem bro, nature is profound! :)
it was a beauty! mubaarak ho..:)
ReplyDeleteyipppee !!! such a sweet fib from such sweet person !! this suits u dear !! loved it !!!
ReplyDeletethanks !!
*hugs*
Good one!
ReplyDeleteloved the post again....
:)
soon me too coming up with a try on this kind of poetry...!!
does it have any set format... or restrictions???
badiya hashan....
ReplyDeleteyou are becoming a master at this..
keep it up... :)
Thank you Maverick :))
ReplyDelete@leo
You can do it bro :) it's easiest among all..check prats post, there u'l find syllable counters..
*waiting waiting*
@ kajal
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :))
@ Prats
Glad you liked it..Thank you so much :))
* hugs back*
@ Pulkit
ReplyDeleteThanks bro..Prats blogged a nice post on it..find here
http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/04/fib.html
All the best :)
@ vitruvian boy
ReplyDeleteThank you bro :)) still learning the syllable management:)..
Cheers!!
@ hashan - :) thanks! Il see it!
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