April 16, 2009

An afternoon !!


A
cloud
appeared
outside my door
The far rainbow smiled
Through the big window saw four more
The wind chimes rang,danced and turned to footprints on my wall.

11 comments:

  1. Nice one, nature always appeals to me. So luvd dis one! :)

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  2. hashan, pratsie will be proud of you!

    a third fib?? :O wow, i don't even have one, i trying but the syllable management is problems for me! :)

    lovely poem bro, nature is profound! :)

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  3. yipppee !!! such a sweet fib from such sweet person !! this suits u dear !! loved it !!!

    thanks !!
    *hugs*

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  4. Good one!
    loved the post again....
    :)
    soon me too coming up with a try on this kind of poetry...!!
    does it have any set format... or restrictions???

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  5. badiya hashan....
    you are becoming a master at this..
    keep it up... :)

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  6. Thank you Maverick :))

    @leo
    You can do it bro :) it's easiest among all..check prats post, there u'l find syllable counters..
    *waiting waiting*

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  7. @ kajal

    Thank you so much :))


    @ Prats

    Glad you liked it..Thank you so much :))
    * hugs back*

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  8. @ Pulkit

    Thanks bro..Prats blogged a nice post on it..find here

    http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/04/fib.html

    All the best :)

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  9. @ vitruvian boy

    Thank you bro :)) still learning the syllable management:)..

    Cheers!!

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