Wind was moving at a tranquilizing pace..
I could sense its softening embrace..
Looked at you from the distance far..
Loved the way you sizzled under stars..
You gave me a smile that ripped me apart..
Our love seemed eternal under the moonlit sky.
. "Unveil the mystic countenance you have guy"
My heart pounded at a rapid pace..
And I felt your magic from toe to face..
Reverie of the moments spent together..
Returned to me from the start and..
Your mesmerizing touch allayed my heart..
Moving on my knees I took your hand in mine..
Easing my breath I said "Marry ME and Forever be mine"
Cross Posted at www.chaarzforyou.blogspot.com
ur poem encompasses all those feelings when love is to be revealed.
ReplyDeleteand any girl's heart goes out for the cute stance when the guy proposes her on his knees.
well handled.loved it.
that was super cute charz..nice as ever...well felt nd written :)
ReplyDelete@ aparna.
ReplyDeleteyeah u r rght..that moment is Very SPecial for evry gurl..:)
@kings..
I m glad u found it SUPER CUTE :P
Thnks...
loved it!! :) wow!! and i loved the font.. :)
ReplyDeleteCharu. Welcum back to home.Shud say that acrostic poem fever has nt ended yet.Nice 1 yar.Lovd it
ReplyDeletewoww thts reallyy very romantic..
ReplyDeletetht was brilliant.. i loved it.. :)
wow.!! brilliant..!!
ReplyDeleteVery innovative.. :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
waoh I could use this mann ....whenever I would need it in the future :)
ReplyDeleteThanxs ....and yeah the font looks amazing :)
lovely .. the mst romanticx acrostic i came across !!
ReplyDeletewoww charzz,very well written.perhaps the best acrostic i have come across recently..
ReplyDeletewow... that was fantastic.. !!! keep it up!!
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