March 21, 2009

Tribute To The Writers Lounge

Hi everyone. After reading through the beautiful posts of my fellow members over here I was wondering last night if there could be a better way to say my heartfelt thanks to everyone. Just came up with a poem that in short covers all spectrum of the emotions of the members over here which I have tried to analyze with my narcotic mind ! :P
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I see some are lurking in the reflections
of someone else's hidden wonders
I see some are witnessing the deflections
of someone else's forbidden surrenders
I see some are trying to feel something
in the midst of silent words
I see some are burning to heal something
where in the agony flies those birds

I witness some are portraying a craft of thoughts
like a beautiful canvas of splattered carmine
I witness some are rendered cold inside their hearts
lost their faith at the hands of time
I witness some are willing to embrace this cause
this corner of the world is their immortality
I witness some are tired of the worldly laws
their writings depict our cloned fragility

I observe some are in the abyss of change
but on a ship that never leaves the shore
I observe some find a sudden bliss in strange
this ship sails on an ocean of words that
can never be ignored
I observe the legacy here through which
a sanity paves way for the mind
I observe the writings here that depicts
such emotions that were once confined

I see , witness and observe for something
I really don't have a clue
All I know is an unknown drift promising
me a similar few . . . . :)

11 comments:

  1. I observe some are in the abyss of change
    but on a ship that never leaves the shore
    I observe some find a sudden bliss in strange
    this ship sails on an ocean of words that
    can never be ignored
    I observe the legacy here through which
    a sanity paves way for the mind
    I observe the writings here that depicts
    such emotions that were once confined



    *claps*

    kudos for such brilliance Ragpicker !! wats ur real name dude ?? you definitely shell out sm gems here :)

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  2. Wonderful! Dats was simply awesome! I mean it! U r adding to the grandeur of da lounge wid every post of urs!
    Gr8 havin u here nd want to read much frm u! :)

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  3. VOILA! That's such an oUTSTANDING one. One entire lounge so honestly summed up in a single poem.

    I loved it through, and read it almost thrice.... have even saved it my favs. Really a cherishable one.

    "I witness some are tired of the worldly laws
    their writings depict our cloned fragility "

    Loved the above lines most, and the poem too :)

    **CROWN***

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  4. VOILA! That's such an oUTSTANDING one. One entire lounge so honestly summed up in a single poem.

    I loved it through, and read it almost thrice.... have even saved it my favs. Really a cherishable one.

    "I witness some are tired of the worldly laws
    their writings depict our cloned fragility "

    Loved the above lines most, and the poem too :)

    And yeap, what's your name?

    **CROWN***

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  5. I see an observer with a completely new face,
    Getting engrossed in the friendly embrace.
    I hope the observation of the observer,
    keeps us all enlightened forever..
    lol..

    You look so devoted already..:P
    An extraordinary dedication to the lounge...

    Kudos...!!

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  6. You know how much I love your work! Just another masterpiece :) Loving it!!!!

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  7. Hey..its fantastic buddy !!
    Glad having you in WL..w

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  8. the best part is this poem reflects everyone here and i have been through each of the phases mentioned here.. :) ragpicker this is your narcotic brain..then i wonder what comes out when you are clean.. :) (i dont think my terminologies are right) kudos!!

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  9. @ ragpicker... a big round of applause for this one... i m awestruck!! u summed up everything so accurately and beautifully... lovely.. hats off to u!!

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  10. @everyone : Thanks for your great reading and observation. The whole essence of this poem lies in how much we can relate ourselves to it. And thats what I can figure out from all your feedback.

    @pretty me & @llashree : I'm really sorry but I cant disclose my real name due to some agnostic reasons. :(

    You can call me ragpicker or just 'rag'.

    @ pink orchid : If I recall correctly the last time I did something with a clean mind was burned a rat inside a micro wave. Umm smell was nice really :)

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