March 18, 2009

Replying to Rash:

my take:

these enchanting dreams cant be reality
every sand castle is to be broken by mortality
my heart inundated in the torrent within
forgetting you was not easy to begin!
I found myriad of stones in desert of humanity
though i always sought for a heart like me,
but all were dead, nonchalant and cold.
wrapped in deceit folds by fold.
as the shadow of sinking sun floated over the lake
winds sped with every move i made
and with all the rough and rugged steps i took
I finally learned to glide on waves!

9 comments:

  1. Love you, babe! Whether he hurts her or not. She now knows what to expect from him and had made peace!

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  2. Yeah... She learnt well, didn't she?

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  3. BEAUTIFUL!

    Loved every word of it.....

    **and with all the rough and rugged steps i took
    I finally learned to glide on waves!**

    ((((( APPLAUDES)))))

    http://missshe.today.com/

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  4. Wonderful, Asbah!
    A Beautiful Reply! And Congratulations to her for learning so well!

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  5. wah..!! super..!! :P

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. it was so creative and beautifully expressed.

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