Kya mere dost hai kahi?

My musings over a very obvious fact, just represented them in a poetic form because I'd never done that before. I think the Hindi version is better, but do let me know what you think of it.

Hindi Version:

Sharaab ke pyaale mein jaankha meine,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Raat ke sannate mein chikhta hoon mein,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Din ke bheed se puchta hoon mein,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Melo ki rangeeniyo mein dhoondta hoon,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Chai ke cutting se kaha, jaga mujhe,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Tyohaaron ki khushiya mein sochta hoon mein,
Kya mere dost hai kahi?

Har taraf, bas ek hi jawaab,
"Hai tere dost kahi nahin..
Kahi nahin, kahi nahin,...
Aaj na tumhe dost milenge na dushman,
Bas maas aur haddi ke putle hai har kahin,
Khushiyon ke chand moko ke liye,
Dost ko nahi, karm ki soche,
Zamana hai karmayogi ka,
Safalta agar tumhaare tan se lipaki hogi,
To tumhaare dost har kahi..
Lekin agar safalta nahi hai tumhaare paas,
To tumhaare dost kahi nahin.. kahi nahin.. kahi nahin.."

Translation:
I gazed into a glass of whiskey,
Where are my friends?

I scream in the calmness of the night,
Where are my friends?

In the crowd of the day, I ask,
Where are my friends?

In the colourful fairs, I seek,
Where are my friends?

To a cup of tea, I pleaded, wake me up,
Where are my friends?


In the happiness of the festivals, I wonder,
Where are my friends?

I get the same answer:
"Your friends are nowhere
In fact you have no friends..
You will only find statues of flesh and bones,
The times are for the successful,
Only the successful have friends,
And if you are not,
You won't have any.."