March 7, 2009

Mr. Smelly Walks


Of crowded and fast paced Delhi
From which ever road passed Mr. Smelly
The way he used to walk
All Children used to mock
But he didn’t care and ate more jelly





*This is of course in response and a continuation of Tan's post. Thanks Tan for giving this Limerick thing a new dimension.
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10 comments:

  1. StepMAN (Superheroes ka Baap)Saturday, March 07, 2009 10:35:00 AM

    but i find this silly ...oh silly


    silly poem ....silly smelly

    nice nice.....i love ur poems

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  2. AnonymousSaturday, March 07, 2009 10:39:00 AM

    :( :(..first 2 lines i seriously thought u din lik ds...oh silly me :D

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  3. nanSaturday, March 07, 2009 2:38:00 PM

    Funny :P

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  4. Mohita SaxenaSaturday, March 07, 2009 4:43:00 PM

    Slightly hilarious.
    I had fun reading this.
    An amazing theme,I must say!!

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  5. AnonymousSaturday, March 07, 2009 8:28:00 PM

    smelly eating jelly..

    life is so much fun at WL.. :D

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  6. AnilaSaturday, March 07, 2009 9:16:00 PM

    hehe nice one.. :)

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  7. The Vitruvian BoySunday, March 08, 2009 2:09:00 AM

    he he....!!!
    Who's Mr Smelly??
    Is he a member of our lounge?? :P

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  8. AnonymousSunday, March 08, 2009 11:24:00 AM

    nice one... m still not able to master it ... :(

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  9. Kings ChaosMonday, March 09, 2009 3:50:00 AM

    really funny and superbly written :)

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  10. TanMonday, March 09, 2009 9:43:00 PM

    Hehehe .. funny one Gul ... hehehe ... eating more Jelly is it? hahaha ...

    Good One :)

    Limerick ka jawab nahi!!

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