March 7, 2009

Mr. Smelly Walks


Of crowded and fast paced Delhi
From which ever road passed Mr. Smelly
The way he used to walk
All Children used to mock
But he didn’t care and ate more jelly






*This is of course in response and a continuation of Tan's post. Thanks Tan for giving this Limerick thing a new dimension.

10 comments:

  1. but i find this silly ...oh silly


    silly poem ....silly smelly

    nice nice.....i love ur poems

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  2. :( :(..first 2 lines i seriously thought u din lik ds...oh silly me :D

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  3. Slightly hilarious.
    I had fun reading this.
    An amazing theme,I must say!!

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  4. smelly eating jelly..

    life is so much fun at WL.. :D

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  5. he he....!!!
    Who's Mr Smelly??
    Is he a member of our lounge?? :P

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  6. nice one... m still not able to master it ... :(

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  7. really funny and superbly written :)

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  8. Hehehe .. funny one Gul ... hehehe ... eating more Jelly is it? hahaha ...

    Good One :)

    Limerick ka jawab nahi!!

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