PreScript: CrossPosted from my blog!
I don't know why,
I always find something amiss with me,
There are some ever-present faults,
What worse could my life be!
I wish I could fly,
Like a bird in the open sky,
Feel the wind sweeping along my body,
See the world just speeding by!
I wish I could swim,
Like a fish in the deep blue sea,
Scour out hidden treasures and troves,
At a depth I couldn't fathom to be!
I wish I could be just as bright,
As the red hot sun,
Spread my heat and warmth along,
And give life to everyone!
I wish I could be as wise,
As the ancient old sages,
Would solve all problems and decipher all mysteries,
In minutes rather than ages!
I wish I could be as strong,
As the great mythical Greek gods,
Would force my way through all the trouble,
And would win against all odds!
I wish I could be as rich,
As the wealthiest king there has ever been,
Would live in riches and be benevolent,
Unlike anyone the world has ever seen!
I wish I was as fortunate,
As the lovely couples around,
Would love her to eternity,
My joy would have no bound!
My list of wishes is never ending,
I always find something I miss,
Can't help it; its human nature,
So cannot find happiness or bliss!
But I look around myself,
Sadness, starvation & deprivation is all I see,
I make a final wish from my heart,
Let everyone be at least as fortunate as me!
Nice read, the best part is how it ends. Sends a very true message which touches your heart. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteyes the ending held a strong message
ReplyDeletewe should learn to count ourselves lucky when compared to those poor and needy
nice poem mav :)
oh Mav, dont we all wish the same?.. thank you for sharing this one with us :)
ReplyDelete@ Satans Darling
ReplyDeleteThank u so much! :)
@ Aparna
Glad that u likd it!
@ Kajal
NO, Thank you fr liking it. :)
what began as a simple wishful poem ended at such powerful note.. whoa !!
ReplyDeleteThnx Prats! :)
ReplyDeleteSeconding SD, it really is a marvelous piece.
ReplyDeleteesp. the way you sum up the pearls in one choker. yeah the last lines ..awesome!
niceee.. tht was lovellyy :)
ReplyDeleteThanks uz & Ani!
ReplyDeletewow... simple and sweet ... and yeah... the last verse left a huge impact on me... lovely thoughts.. !!
ReplyDeletekeep it up.. keep writing.. cheers!
Thnx Mona!
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