Lead me to your side soon
Once just look into my eyes
Vibrant you are as always
Every moment without you I die
You are the only one for me
Only regrets have I with me now
Undying devotion, I crave your love
Beloved, please forgive my mistake
Again I shall not let you leave so
Bless my life, with your presence again,
Your hand, I shall never again let go
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perfect rhyme in an acrostic.. lovely .. liked the last lines a lot...
ReplyDeleteheyyyyyyyyy Vinu. I was so sure you were gonna try this and voila it was a beautiful as it gets.. :)
ReplyDeleteWaoh ...really nice dude ...the last line hit the jackpot ...really ....
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
ReplyDeletewonderful leo..
ReplyDeletelovely poem :)
its totally beautiful :-)
ReplyDelete@prats,
ReplyDeletethank you teacher! ;)
glad u liked it!
@kajal,
ReplyDeleteteacher is very close friend. had to try. :)
and m glad u loved it sis..
@anurag,
ReplyDeletethanks.
@megha,
ReplyDeletethank you.
@aps,
ReplyDeletethank you.
@nabila,
ReplyDeletethank you.
Really beautifull and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteawwww makes me feels so musshhhyy now.. lovely..
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