March 5, 2009

birth of a haiku

like forest fires
the words raiment my blithe ideas-
birth of a haiku

20 comments:

  1. Your words like fireflies.. illuminating the path through they travel making us try new things! I have said it enough! But i do love you :D

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  2. same here dearie !! and that was fast :D bye now ...

    sachchi me going :D

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  3. Rashi said it all :) nice one as ever ;)

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  4. wow..!! like forest fires..??!! That was awesome.. :)

    I'm enjoying this...

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. thanksie gul !! :)

    ps: is it ur real name ?

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  6. Ste : dhamki mil gai ??? thankuuu so much fr visiting :)

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  7. see, teachers ideas are taken up so enthusiastically...! :)

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  8. me here too :P

    wht do i say to d teacher?!
    loved it ma'am! ;)

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  9. forest fires!! so apt.. muah for this one.. :)

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  10. well prats..heena is ma real name...gulshan is ma nick...i don mind either :)

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  11. so i have to adjust to be called teacher ??? ok then... be it so Leo :P

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  12. ha ha .. thanksie Priyanka ... love the responses too !!!

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  13. Yeah.. u can see for yourself kajal :)

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  14. i like gul !! thats wat i will call u :)

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