March 5, 2009

Haiku : a conjunctivitis

Well ..bored up and insomniac..i thought ill check up my mails..and guess what i found...the haiku fever running outside WL...ehh..to my blog and my friends...though i din't write any new haiku...after the first one.....here wht i got as a comment from my friend....i know it isn't perfect and has 30 syllable..but he manged in 3 lines (which is rellly appreciable of him..given his love for his keyboard keys... :P )

Thought will post it on WL..so that everyone can know how addictive haiku is getting ...:)

Dhir said...

anyways arz hai


no one's here at this juncture
just tubelight, fan and a computer
if it stays the same, my unit test marks will be very lame :D

Cheers !!!!
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11 comments:

  1. TanThursday, March 05, 2009 5:09:00 AM

    Hmmm... good one Gulshan ... Say my hi to Dhir too ...

    Thanks for sharing ...

    3 lines, it is :)

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  2. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 8:38:00 AM

    that was really good one !!!
    and perfect rhyme :D

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  3. Kings ChaosThursday, March 05, 2009 9:38:00 AM

    That was good piece of rhyming lines, perfection or not, rather a good attempt and good one :)

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  4. ArjunThursday, March 05, 2009 10:21:00 AM

    haha... good one....

    Three cheers to Prats for this Haiku thing..!! hehe

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  5. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 10:44:00 AM

    thanks tan, pretty, arjun and king..dhir ll love the comment..i told him about the syllable concept..he said he ll try that out 2...:D :D haiku fever on its way :P

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  6. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 1:04:00 PM

    wait and watch for the next style .. i will make sure i will give you something with syllable count but maybe more flexible than haiku !!

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  7. Kings ChaosThursday, March 05, 2009 1:19:00 PM

    waiting for it prats...waiting...u sadi flexible ehhh... i'm all for it ;)

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  8. Kings ChaosThursday, March 05, 2009 1:20:00 PM

    waiting for it prats...waiting...u said flexible ehhh... i'm all for it ;)

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  9. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 2:23:00 PM

    i know Kings... i bet u will like it a bit better if not too much ;)

    ps: i love being a hard teacher at times !!

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  10. AnilaThursday, March 05, 2009 4:58:00 PM

    aww thts nice.. :)

    considering pretty me is impressed ;) hehe

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  11. AnonymousThursday, March 05, 2009 6:40:00 PM

    for dhir it was a great start.. full on exam feeling..

    and Prats, did you say flexible?? :D wow! i am all for it.. :)

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