February 13, 2009

A WINNER DECLARED : A naisaiku

each dawn i resolve,
all my dreams, visualised!
victory will forge

A WINNER DECLARED
victory will forge
all my dreams, visualised!
each dawn i resolve.

Learnt this form of poetry here

14 comments:

  1. This is a 5-7-5 haiku connected by a 5 syllable long title !

    there are few more styles to write a naisaiku !

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  2. *bows down to thee*

    Im serious!! THat looked tough!! :)

    Damn good ya! Im seriously spellbound! :D

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  3. Hey raash ... its not difficult if you really pay attention .. just a little bit of creativity ;) !! glad you liked it :)

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  4. oh yes.. accept a bow from me too Prats.. You are a true poet who is ready to experiment with your creativity every single moment... Love you for this Prats.. thank you! :)

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  5. creative and interesting enough.. checkd out the link..

    good one prats :)

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  6. Woah..!!!
    That was creativity to it's best..!!
    U r awesome Prats..!!

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. phew!

    That was awesome.. honestly!

    its like you know, i dono much about poetry, this is compelling me learn... *clicks on the link*

    yeah seriously tough. But then, its our prats, where tough gets going ;)

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  8. WOW great concept!!!
    ... Thanks for showing this and teaching me one more thing!! ...

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  9. as i said before Pink, when i am at loss of ideas, i balance it with technique ;) thanks for the nice wordsand bow !!

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  10. thanks kings .. i appreciate your read and comments :)

    stop praising me so much Arjun .. you are too generous !!

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  11. I cant help Prats..!! I really mean wat i say..!! :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  12. thanks for the wonderful words, support and the praises Asbah... :)


    Thanks for trying that Tan :)


    @Arjun... I know u mean it :)

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