February 3, 2009

That Which Wouldn't Mend

I wished for a friend in the darkest times,

A friend I wished to be,

As I drowned in my own fateful rhymes,

My thoughts weighed in on me


I felt too lost; too numb, I knelt,

I felt just as lonely,

As lonely as she must have felt,

The day she had left me


She’s Gone! She’s Gone! I said and wept,

My tears just knew no end,

My cries were soft, yet so well kept,

In a heart that would not mend


Time  thus passed like a silent curse,

My cries, I stifled out,

But things soon went from bad to worse,

My cries had turned to shouts


Maybe that’s why my pain was heard

And someone did respond,

Just when I thought my end had neared,

My life seemed like reborn!


I opened out, like I never could,

She made me feel consoled,

She watched me, like a mother would,

She watched my life unfold


Her open arms I sought and found,

I rested there and cried,

She brought me back to my rebound

Her love, personified!


She found in me what I had lost

My vision she restored,


What I thought could never mend,

With love, it had been cured


“She’s now too far” some say to me,

But that is so untrue,

For when I close my eyes and see,

I find her, true and true.

12 comments:

  1. dark inspiration riversoul! super! last lines were wonderful especially!

    ReplyDelete
  2. “She’s now too far” some say to me,


    But that is so untrue,


    For when I close my eyes and see,


    I find her, true and true.

    such beauty!! kudos sid!!

    ReplyDelete
  3. It is soulful! And wonderfully written... Loved reading it :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. Not exactly dark, leo.
    It is the story of a heart that is mended after having been broken. The upheaval of the broken soul, after a lost relationship. How a total stranger can mend another's heart, just by patiently listening.

    Hope you liked it
    :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. Thank you, Pink
    :)
    Glad you liked it.
    :)
    :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. Thank you, satan's darling,
    :)
    Glad you liked it.
    :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Yes, nan,
    Heartwrenching but true.
    :)
    :)

    It does happen. Has happened.
    :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. very beautiful and soulful....and u write amazing as i read thru i cd actually feel it :-)

    ReplyDelete

Comments are sexy.