I wished for a friend in the darkest times,
A friend I wished to be,
As I drowned in my own fateful rhymes,
My thoughts weighed in on me
I felt too lost; too numb, I knelt,
I felt just as lonely,
As lonely as she must have felt,
The day she had left me
She’s Gone! She’s Gone! I said and wept,
My tears just knew no end,
My cries were soft, yet so well kept,
In a heart that would not mend
Time thus passed like a silent curse,
My cries, I stifled out,
But things soon went from bad to worse,
My cries had turned to shouts
Maybe that’s why my pain was heard
And someone did respond,
Just when I thought my end had neared,
My life seemed like reborn!
I opened out, like I never could,
She made me feel consoled,
She watched me, like a mother would,
She watched my life unfold
Her open arms I sought and found,
I rested there and cried,
She brought me back to my rebound
Her love, personified!
She found in me what I had lost
My vision she restored,
What I thought could never mend,
With love, it had been cured
“She’s now too far” some say to me,
But that is so untrue,
For when I close my eyes and see,
I find her, true and true.
dark inspiration riversoul! super! last lines were wonderful especially!
ReplyDeletelovely .. i really liked it :)
ReplyDelete“She’s now too far” some say to me,
ReplyDeleteBut that is so untrue,
For when I close my eyes and see,
I find her, true and true.
such beauty!! kudos sid!!
It is soulful! And wonderfully written... Loved reading it :)
ReplyDeleteHeart wrenching one !
ReplyDeleteNot exactly dark, leo.
ReplyDeleteIt is the story of a heart that is mended after having been broken. The upheaval of the broken soul, after a lost relationship. How a total stranger can mend another's heart, just by patiently listening.
Hope you liked it
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Thank you, Prats
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Thank you, Pink
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Glad you liked it.
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Thank you, satan's darling,
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Glad you liked it.
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Yes, nan,
ReplyDeleteHeartwrenching but true.
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It does happen. Has happened.
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very beautiful and soulful....and u write amazing as i read thru i cd actually feel it :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you mysterious gal
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