February 1, 2009

My First Inspiration, My Mother!



Lying in a small cradle,

I looked around with a whimper,

The new world seemed alien,

Yet there was someone familiar,

With soft hands and a inspiring smile,

The one with the most maternal affection,

That was my first inspiration- my mother!



I started growing and so did my nature,

I learned tantrums, I learned fighting and emotional crying,

Yet she was around to listen, to support and to wipe,

She was my teacher and a benefactor,

Often I slept in those arms while crying,

And she stayed still not to wake me up,

That was my first inspiration- my mother!



I entered my puberty and I became different,

She was still caring but I started get irritated by her,

As my hormones were playing their game,

Then all of a sudden I found a friend in her,

My inhibitions went away and I found a friend for life,

My crushes, my heartbreaks and my tensions had a listener,

That was my first inspiration-my mother!



Life started moving forward rapidly and fast,

From a child to a teenager to an adult I had traveled,

From a patron to a friend to a best friend she had traveled,

I found a selfless friend in a selfish world,

She took my anger, my bad mouthing and miserable ways,

Yet she stood like a wall against my problems protecting me forever,

She was my first inspiration but today she is my lifelong inspiration,

She is my mother, my best friend and my life!




Word Count=250 words




P.S. Mom i love you the most in this world and you will always be my best friend !




16 comments:

  1. i was waiting for something like this. and you create magic girl.. :)
    mommy rocks!!

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  2. thanks a lot for liking it
    no doubt mommy rocks bigtime :-)

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  3. Awwww... I have no words for this! My mom knows everything... Everything..Sitting up there in heaven..She is my guiding star..


    From a child to a teenager to an adult I had traveled,

    From a patron to a friend to a best friend she had traveled,




    Loved these lines!

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  4. these lines r my fav too :-)
    Thanks for liking it

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  5. :) good 1! esp.

    I started growing and so did my nature,

    I learned tantrums, I learned fighting and emotional crying,...

    cute..

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  6. a bful poem...show to ur mom..u'l get a big hug :)

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  7. awwww...Mamma...Mother always inspire us without a doubt...... but this post was ...awww..... :D

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  8. thanks people for appreciating it ....:-)...when i first saw this contest...this was the first theme i wanted to compose it on and i m glad u all liked it :D

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  9. These are just words, with which we can just assuage our thoughts. There is no limit with we can describe the feelings towards our greatest inspiration and care taker....our moms... :)

    You have done a great job. I had something similar in mind,but as you have addressed the very issue, i feel myself less burdened.Of so many inspirational thoughts we get, nothing is as great as the love and affection of our parents. well done

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  10. thanks you so much for such great words
    and thats true whatever love may come and go but notin as great and amazing as those of our parents :-)
    And moms always r too amazing to be even expressed...i just wished i could express a part of my gratitude .....

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  11. Mothers are the beat ispiration ever :)

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  12. Gr8 work Nabila
    :)
    Yea.
    Mommy rocks.
    :)
    A fitting tribute to the Mother
    :)
    Do review mine too.
    :)

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