February 25, 2009

Miss you


More i think of you
I miss you even more.
Sadness fills my heart as
Some memories fly past.


You miss me too some time
Oh ! will it ever be true
Untill my next lifetime?

14 comments:

  1. And thats so true ... nice words ... nice composition!!
    In fact, I was about to write something with that word ... I need to rethink now ;) probably I would not make it ...

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  2. So true....
    Suits everyone who's lost a dear one...

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  3. very touchy and nicely composed :)

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  4. short...simple...powerful!! wow...the last question that you posed.....simply brilliant!!

    good going prats!

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  5. pleasure to see your comemnt Insiya :)

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  6. short, simple and sweet.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. ohh prats...u know i dont need to say anything...ur poems r mine.. ;)
    last para...so true...sniff...

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