February 25, 2009

Acrostic Poems and me


Subhas Chandra Bose

Singing patriotically,and
Uniting for a cause, screwing the
Badness of the Raj
Head held high, inspiring the
Affluent ,the poor and all
Seeking a vision thought so far,and

Catching the imagination of all
Heroic was his life and ways
And not just in war,with due respect
Netaji did we call, the bravest of all,ever
Dearer to our heart, will be
Revered ever for
Aeon's to come. not the one, to be

Beleaguered,undeterred by mounting odds
Offered a ray of hope for us all
Surprising the Britishers most of all
Enigmatic was he in life as death!




INDIA

Inspiring all time,with
Never ending wisdom.
Dearest of our hearts
Immensely impeccable,for
Aeon's to come.




~ kings`CmU

7 comments:

  1. i loved the Indai poem before .. but the other one was just commendable !! thanks for sharing this :)

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  2. that was lovely.. very patriotic as well.. :)

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  3. You just said it Kings!! Good one - I remember my days reading voluminous novels and books written on him ... I'm as awestruck by Netaji as anything else in the world! He is the REAL SUPER HERO of India ... and as you said, he is always close to our hearts!

    This line: with due respect Netaji did we call is not true ... for we Still Call Him NETAJI and will always call him so ...

    A few grammatical errors, I found but looking at the subject everything else just dwarfs! I loved this and appreciate you chose this subject!

    FYI, we are so obsessed by Netaji, that we actually married on His Birthday!! (lol, but true)

    Jai Hind!!

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  4. Nice use of words....
    very patriotic...
    Netaji bose is really a forgotten hero...

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  5. @prats ,ani ,tan ,kajal ,vitruvianboy

    thanks prats, the india was short and sweet, guess its not the same with Netaji.But couldnt help it, he's one my heroes and the next thing i got in mind after writing about india was about subhas chandra bose.

    @tan
    I wrote in a short span of time and posted immed,so didnt spell check it again. Hey tan!! lemme know if you got the azad hind fauz ka anthem.. khadam khadam badaye ja..i love that song..tried searchin on net but didnt find the full song..

    Jai Hind!!

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  6. Kings, I'm happy to see that you wanted the song ... I am happy to have searched for it and give you the links ... just because you wrote that wonderful poem! Have a look at the following:

    Kadam Kadam Badhaye Ja - song

    Kadam Kadam Badhaye Ja - Lyrics

    Enjoy!!

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