February 14, 2009

Me and HIm ... A Comparison


Main sab ko khushian daiti hun
Main sab ke dukh bhi sehti hun
wo wahan pe tanha dikhta hai
Main bhi to yahan akaili hun
Wo kirnon se apna hal chupyae
Main dukh ki aar main hansti hun
Wo badal ki aout main nir bahaye
Main dil he dil main roti hun
Wo kitna mujh sa lagta ahi
Main kitni us se dikhti hun

(An english version)

I mete out the blisses
I bear alone thy abrasion
He alone dwell the blue
I share with me my solitude
He swathe in sheen
I smile with a woe
Mist in clouds veil his moan
I pervade my soul
He is my other me
I am his sole cohort




(the poem depicts a similarity that a human on earth and a moon on sky shares..

words describing a solitude of all those who have suffered.)

13 comments:

  1. Brilliant! Solitude can be sometimes so liberating... The moon there all alone. Looking at the world. Looking at people making mistakes, making follies and yet cant do anything. He can see people laugh and cant join in. He can see people cry and cant give a shoulder. Surrounded by stars, up high and yet alone. All alone! SIGH!

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  2. wel Written R.V!!

    that is a real gief.though the moon is just an emblemm but there are so many beings around with much potential of making a difference but lacking a motivation factor...

    StAY Bleesed

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  3. very well written !!! lovely idea and depiction is indeed beautiful :) love reading u !!

    ps: sorry i forgot ur nmae though .. :(

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  4. :) really nice comparison,very meaningfull

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  5. wow hugs uzra wonderful... loved the theme

    especially thse
    wo wahan pe tanha dikhta hai
    Main bhi to yahan akaili hun
    Wo kirnon se apna hal chupyae
    Main dukh ki aar main hansti hun

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  6. @rashi
    i didnt know your name before!

    my pleasure pretty...
    *hugs*
    i am uzra b.t.w. :)

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  7. thank you king :)

    *smiles* insyia..stay blessed!

    and your appreciation works as an oxygen at times .
    thanks satan


    stay blessed guys!

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  8. wooow uz...speechless i am..gr8 composition...

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