February 14, 2009

I don't know myself..

No carefree smiles,
No spontaneous laughs,
No stupid jokes to tell,
No moment full of crazy talks!!

I want to be unnoticed,
I want to be left alone,
I want to retreat into myself
I want to forget about all.

No spirit for a cheerful day,
No desire to search reason
No heart to forgive anyone
who came and stayed for a season!!

I don't remember warm cares,
I don't bother of love lost,
I don't refrain from hurting egos,
I don't know myself any more!!

14 comments:

  1. hey Prats :( everything is fine right? me got worried... lovely poem but it is soooooooooo sad. exhibits a kind of numbness one gets after going through a lot of pain..

    Prats your smile can make anyone's day. Keep it going, alright? :)

    if there is no one today,
    you can smile with,
    if there is no reason today,
    for you to open up,
    I'd say girl,
    you smile for me,
    coz that's one thing that matters a lot..!!!


    luvs :)

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  2. I agree with Kajal! It is a lovely piece of writing but hope it is not what you're going through :) Keep smiling! It creates wonders!

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  3. Aww! Is the day making you feel bad? Dont you worry!

    Some bad decisions make us wonder what we are, question our sense, wonder whether some dreams will come true. But trust me, dreams are just that - Dreams. You can change them whenever you want.

    Whenever you say you dont care, it is the hurt talking. Dont do that. Let you talk. The hurt can never be stronger than you. Unless you let it! DONT LET IT! And we are always with you to support you and talk! The least and most we can do! You will have to overcome this by yourself!

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  4. aww...dat ws soo sad! n touching!!

    I want to be unnoticed,
    I want to be left alone,
    I want to retreat into myself
    I want to forget about all.

    ohh...i feel so many a times! :(

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  5. hey thats was too sad, i second kajal keep smiling :)

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  6. Hey Kajal ... i have said before too that you always make me smile !! and u just did that again .. its oartilly inspired from my feelings but not entirely the truth .. :)

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  7. thanks for the read SD !! Appreciate ur cares :)

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  8. true said Raash, hurt should never let rule our hearts... thanks for the read and good words... :)

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  9. I want to be unnoticed,
    I want to be left alone,
    I want to retreat into myself
    I want to forget about all.

    The theme is lovely though saddening.

    These lines depicting a refuge in solitude..

    I want to be unnoticed,
    I want to be left alone,
    I want to retreat into myself
    I want to forget about all.


    Well written!

    I read somewhere,

    Man comes in world unaccompanied and he would depart all alone than why when he’s secluded, qualms and suspicions reign him and lead him to fathoms of fears??


    stay blessed and ahve a blissful life ahead .

    *hugs*

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  10. I am feeling so right now Priyanka .. but its not that bad ;)

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  11. Thanks for sharing that lovely thought here uz !! *hugz* :)

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  12. Loved this as a poem.. though it was sad.. I loved the way it was put.. :) :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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