February 23, 2009

Love You Dear


Let’s share life
Once more
Violating the rules. Now,
Even more

Years passed
Over the edge
Under the same roof

Dealt with life
Every time
And again
Reassessing all proof'!


14 comments:

  1. Hey Thanks Kajal/TPO ...

    I an happy to have met Pratibha here - I found a teacher in her ... she has taught me a couple of things and it seems like its never ending ...

    Looking forward to more such innovative ideas in the future ... will try to experiment more ... Thanks for all of your encouragements ...

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  2. Hi Tan, thanks for dropping by .. like your acrostic ..

    Will do a post on how I write acrostic ... good idea!

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  3. a new genre again...wow...poets amaze me...every single moment..a power packed post tan...too good!!

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  4. simple and sweet :)
    it reflects the years spent in a relation nurturing it and the will to keep it on !!

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  5. it was so touching..!!
    I loved every single line from the bottom of my heart.

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  6. Thanks Amias for visiting our blog ... here you will find scores of gems scattered around - breaking boundaries and borders and bind together by words ... do visit us sometimes ...

    I tried to experiment ... I'm glad Sandeep, that you liked it ...

    Thanks Kings, Nan and Ani ...

    Pratibha, you got it right - on the spot!! And thanks ... for teaching me this ...

    Mohita, I'm happy that you liked it ... I write what I feel and if my words can touch hearts ... WOW!! What else do I need to say here?? Thanks for the visit ... keep reading and writing ...

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  7. Thanks Amias for visiting our blog ... here you will find scores of gems scattered around - breaking boundaries and borders and bind together by words ... do visit us sometimes ...

    I tried to experiment ... I'm glad Sandeep, that you liked it ...

    Thanks Kings, Nan and Ani ...

    Pratibha, you got it right - on the spot!! And thanks ... for teaching me this ...

    Mohita, I'm happy that you liked it ... I write what I feel and if my words can touch hearts ... WOW!! What else do I need to say here?? Thanks for the visit ... keep reading and writing ...

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  8. heyyy tan...a really lovely poem!!! :)

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  9. nice acrostics...
    with lots of happiness and hopes for a nice future....
    liked it... :)

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  10. @ Priyanka and Virtruvian Boy

    Thanks for the read ... thank you for liking it and the wonderful wishes too ... these mean a lot - humesha!!

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