I too wanted to wait,
to stand at the same place,
where your loving eyes
could easily find me.
but your eyes saw me different,
You left me 'cause of my friends.I too wanted to hear,
the three magical words,
that if you meant by heart,
could have been my new start.
but you never said anything good
instead you hurt me like no one could.I too wanted to spend
each of my life's bend
in your heart's cocoon,
a loved life,my desired boon.
but you never gave me the reason
to stay together even a season.
you never gave me the reason,
ReplyDeleteto stay together a season..
poetry at one of its best.. :)
All I want to hear
ReplyDeleteAre those three words
All I want is you
to say that you care.
Tell me you want to
Be with me, forever.
Tell me you want to
hold my hand, everywhere.
If you just had,
I would fight the world,
For you, to be with you..
Sorry this sounded like a literal translation of a sidey hindi movie...But All I wanted to say is that take one step toward me and I will a 100 steps for you :D
Prats, wonderful one! luvd it! :)
ReplyDeleteAnother so very Prats di write ;)
ReplyDelete:) nice
ReplyDeleteAs amazing as ever..!!
ReplyDeletetoo good pratsie...nice rhyming as well...especially the verses in italics...those two lines stood out....way to go! way to go!
ReplyDeletebut your eyes saw me different,
ReplyDeleteYou left me 'cause of my friends.
my life captured in those two lines...a pat on the back pretty me...too good...
thats the best comments i can get Pink .. thanks !!
ReplyDeleteseconding stepman!
ReplyDeletei feel as if i am stuck soemwhere amid the depth of these two lines.. somewhere between the acme of being disregarded on account of loved ones...
well written
stay blessed!!
thanku soo much raas for those wonderful lines :) loved reading it !
ReplyDeletethanks to - Maverick , Nan, kings, mohita :)
ReplyDeletePleasure to see ur comment Sandeep :)
ReplyDeleteSad if those lines relate to u stepMan..
Its a very painful feeling uz !!
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