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you never gave me the reason,to stay together a season..poetry at one of its best.. :)
All I want to hearAre those three wordsAll I want is youto say that you care.Tell me you want toBe with me, forever.Tell me you want tohold my hand, everywhere.If you just had,I would fight the world,For you, to be with you..Sorry this sounded like a literal translation of a sidey hindi movie...But All I wanted to say is that take one step toward me and I will a 100 steps for you :D
Prats, wonderful one! luvd it! :)
Another so very Prats di write ;)
As amazing as ever..!!
too good pratsie...nice rhyming as well...especially the verses in italics...those two lines stood out....way to go! way to go!
but your eyes saw me different,You left me 'cause of my friends.my life captured in those two lines...a pat on the back pretty me...too good...
thats the best comments i can get Pink .. thanks !!
seconding stepman!i feel as if i am stuck soemwhere amid the depth of these two lines.. somewhere between the acme of being disregarded on account of loved ones...well written stay blessed!!
thanku soo much raas for those wonderful lines :) loved reading it !
thanks to - Maverick , Nan, kings, mohita :)
Pleasure to see ur comment Sandeep :)Sad if those lines relate to u stepMan..
Its a very painful feeling uz !!
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