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wooowwwwww prats.. beautiful , painful and could relate to it.. keep bringing more. ...
quite dark and vengeful...NOICE!Scribblers Inc.
painful to the core...he did not deserve your love....tension not...stepcock:Superheroes ka Baap is here to teach everyone a lesson...gimme the name and address of this person and i will see to it that i delete the word "illicit" from his system ;-)Stepcock:Superheroes ka Baap...with great powers come great responsibilities..n some side effects...
thanks Pink!! sometimes blaming others is so easy ... do we ever think of other's feelings !!
Enjoyed every bit of it!Each word has been selected so aptly and the stanzas haven been woven so beautifully, then I just couldn't stop admiring.A wonderful portrayal of a wounded heart.
arey prats di ;)this one z so poignant
Thanks Scribbler.. I rarely write such dark poem,,,, but this one just flowed ...
Wow, Nw dis is intense! Luvd da way u portrayed anguish! Prats at her best again! :)
@ pratz..:D so dark but so touchng... it touched me.. :$
stepCOCK ... kono baat nahi ... main dekh lengi usko !! ;) thanks for the support anyway :)
My pleasure Mohita .. thanks for the good words :)
thanksie fr the read Nan :)@Maverick : m glad it came out well.. i had serious doubts abt it ... ;)Illusion .. thnaku swt hrt :)
The last line..Was amazing..I love it.. I have nothing to say to you but yeah, I know that feelings! and it sucks!!
glad fr ur nice wrds Raash !!
Once hurt, always hurt. Dark and beautifully portrayed the either relationship, one filled with suspicion,deceit,not so true as looks love and other of pure feelings as in care and mutual love.:)..gr8 goin
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