A dark lonely night,
There is plight,
What to do,what not,
I need an insight.
I am baffled with this quest,
My senses are numb,
Everything is hazy,
Wonder what life has become.
The more I think,
The more I am lost,
Still I am seeking,
An answer at any cost.
There is plight,
What to do,what not,
I need an insight.
I am baffled with this quest,
My senses are numb,
Everything is hazy,
Wonder what life has become.
The more I think,
The more I am lost,
Still I am seeking,
An answer at any cost.
Short,simple and sweet!
ReplyDeleteChaotic it is :) , good one charz...try continuing it ;)
ReplyDeleteThats Life is simplest words :)
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet, but I agree with Kings. It can be continued :) And might turn out to be even better!
ReplyDeletetht was nice..
ReplyDeleten yes like everyone rightly said.. short.. n sweet.. :)
Well..I wud try Continuing..
ReplyDeleteBut it was a reflection of the feeling i was going through when i wrote it..
although i doo feel its kinda left in the middle..
Thnks..
the answers will reach you if you keep writing more poetry :)
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