February 22, 2009

Chaotic Thoughts

A dark lonely night,
There is plight,
What to do,what not,
I need an insight.

I am baffled with this quest,
My senses are numb,
Everything is hazy,
Wonder what life has become.

The more I think,
The more I am lost,
Still I am seeking,
An answer at any cost.

7 comments:

  1. Chaotic it is :) , good one charz...try continuing it ;)

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  2. Short and sweet, but I agree with Kings. It can be continued :) And might turn out to be even better!

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  3. tht was nice..

    n yes like everyone rightly said.. short.. n sweet.. :)

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  4. Well..I wud try Continuing..
    But it was a reflection of the feeling i was going through when i wrote it..
    although i doo feel its kinda left in the middle..
    Thnks..

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  5. the answers will reach you if you keep writing more poetry :)

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