February 11, 2009

Attached!

Attached to the car,
Attached to its feel,
Everythin in it seems humanly real.

Attached to the expressway,
Surfing like the lightning rays,
Gone in sixty seconds would be the phrase,
160 would be the pace.

Attached to the times,
Attached to the smiles,
Which, now are a cause of tears in my eyes.

Attached to the ale,
Attached to the dame,
How drunk was I when I played that funny frame!?

Attached to the moon,
Attached to the stars,
Which used to accompany me through all my wars.

I am no more attached,
I am no more sad,
In the end ‘I am me’ and nothing exists like it ever had.

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Here I am on the road again, There i am up on the stage,
There i go playing star again, There i go, Turn the page - Metallica

6 comments:

  1. This first sounded like a poem for BIG DEAL but this is that and so much more!


    I am no more attached,
    I am no more sad,
    In the end ‘I am me’ and nothing exists like it ever had.


    These lines \m/ .. Great.. Simply great!!! :D


    TORA TORA :D

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  2. wow! its a novel thought and nicely expressed... good one Rohan!

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  3. Shit! I just realised how random my comment was... But you understood na Rohan? I seriously feel like saying TORA TORA everything BIG DEAL comes into the pciture...


    so TORA TORA (again) No, Im not high :P

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  4. Great idea... Nothing is too great to really shake your inner being...

    But, the execution does not reflect the depth of the poem's intent (i.e. if I have understood the intent correctly)...

    Nevertheless, a meaningful thought-provoking write :)

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  5. Rashi@ 'BIGD DEAL' ..no words are sufficient for her..:P

    pink orchid@ thanks yo.

    pretty me (wink wink :P)@ aye aye captain.

    Shreyans @ well the deapth of the poem is 'everyone goes, i stay \m/

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