This is just a reply to Rashi's poem "Awaiting An Answer......! No motives here! Just a plain old reply.... :)
Love was a Chimera,
A Dream for me,
I never ever knew,
How it would feel?
And then one day,
You came into my life,
Everthing changed,
With a blinding flash of light!
You brought me comfort,
You brought me joy,
I felt as if,
I was flying in the sky!
You reached deep down,
And brought out the real me,
I couldn't even express,
How much you mean to me?
My love for you is eternal,
Even though I disguise it,
My heart would beat for you,
Even when I am dying!
I may never say it,
But you are the one for me,
Can't you read my eyes?
The heartfelt love plea!
I wish to have you,
As my love forever,
Its just that I can't express,
How I long your sweet caress!
If it was me who decided fate,
If it was really as easy as this
Would make you mine for eternity,
Would seal our bond with a kiss!
Ah !! wish the last lines were said to me.. i would never leave that guy ... !!! so sweet reply maverick !! ur magic works again ..
ReplyDeletei feel the same maverick...i would nevr leave the guy who said this to me...its amazing...
ReplyDeletesensational... a happy reply from u! :) well done...
ReplyDeletenice one mav!
ReplyDeleteloved every line
@ Leo
ReplyDeleteThx Bro! :)
@ Shweta & Prats
All is not lost! Don't lose hope!
I could say that to u nytime! :P
jst kiddin! :)
Thanx Aparna! :)
ReplyDeleteha ha !!! i meant saying in person .. ;) i might think about you once we meet :P
ReplyDeleteI'd want someone to say all this to me...
ReplyDeleteAww, it leaves you with a mushy feeling...
Yeah I meant da same thng, too! U temme wen do we meet so dat I set ur thinkin gears into motion! :P :P
ReplyDeleteHey Thx Akansha!
ReplyDeleteWell, all gals seem to thnk alike! dat sumone shld say dis to dem!
ReplyDeleteLemme let u gals in on a secret! I said dis to a gal once nd guess wat, It didnt work! :(
wen r u coming to b'lore ?? :P
ReplyDeleteawww... wats wd dat gal ?? or were u flirting ??
ReplyDeleteExcuse me girls... I think those words were meant for me.. :P Even though some1 mentions that there were no intentions..I can hope right :D
ReplyDeleteMaverick, can you gimme that girl's number..You see I am going to be a psychologist...I will charge her no fees...I really want to know what is wrong with her! :D It was brilliant..Amazing *sigh*
@Maverick: all i wanted to say has already been said...
ReplyDeletemy simple "good one" wont be noticed..i know :(
@ Prats
ReplyDeleteBangalore, nytime! U mak upp ur mind! nd ill b der! :P
As far as flirting goes am a person who values commitment! So no flirting for me! :)
@ Rashi
ReplyDeleteWell dat part about no intentions was a partial lie I should say! :P
Am nt famaliar wid evryone's life arnd here nd since am new didnt want to hurt ny emotions!
Ur Poem was so wonderful dat dis came as an automatic response! Ur hopes r da same as mine! :)
That girl's a page turned over for me! so lets leave it at dat! Thx for ur compliments! :)
@ Kajal
ReplyDeleteUr comments howeva small dey may be, will always be valued and cherished! so dnt be sad! remember u said frnds foreva! :)
Thx for da compliments!
@Mav: ya I said "friends forever"..so my "simple comment" also rocks right??? ye ye ye ye .... :D
ReplyDeletesure it does! ur comment
ReplyDelete\m/ rocks \m/! nd rocks hard! :)
@Mav: all smiles..
ReplyDeletebeautiful reply and i loved the lines
ReplyDeletelast 3 or 4 stanzas were noteworthy ,....guess i get to learn from u guys :)
Thanks ste!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteBut you are the one for me,
ReplyDeleteCan't you read my eyes?
The heartfelt love plea!
:)
I assume u likd it Asbah! :)
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