January 17, 2009

I love you..

Why my dear?
why do you love me?
Why not my dear,
i wonder loudly!!


I give you
only tears!!
but with you
nothing i fear!!


I stay so far away,
rarely there for you,
but its your cares
that keep me loving you
.


I am so busy with work
that you are not missed
but you are so honest
should i not love this?


I love you lots
i might never tell again
you said it even once,
this took away all my pains.


This is a conversation between a guy and a girl.. The lines in italics are from girl.hope it makes more sense now :)

17 comments:

  1. prats no wonder vinay call u the poet queen of our lounge...amazing sweets...

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  2. cute one prats... you are on with cuteness...today the lounge is all happy happy with all cheerful writeups.. like how leo said.. "ah what a day!! " :D

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  3. gud write, Prats!
    Kajal's right! everyone's posting happy poems except me! :(

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  4. you ppl are so kind to me re... thanks tweety ..

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  5. pratsie is the queen...yes indeed...

    what an innovative way to make a love poem...! :)

    nice replies from the gal... i never hear such replies from mine...! :)

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  6. *Hugs* If just men could VERBALISE what they felt like this, life would have been so much easier... I know men have feelings just say it at times!!!

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  7. ohh..lovely lovely!!
    ur poems r alwys so touching n as i told u once 'so much like me' too !! :)

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  8. touching one and too good.....yes we can see it

    :)

    peace,
    TSW

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  9. thanks pink !! even m so happy to write smthing so goodie good !! :D

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  10. yes yes! makes perfect sense to me sweet!!!

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  11. ya Akansha .. true love .. and thats not just romantic .. its a friend's thing more likely :)

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  12. @ Leo : the gal wrote these replies coz she heard the exact words from a guy :)

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  13. My pleasure priyanka if you adore my writes so !!

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  14. thanks Ste !! and Asbah ,, you two have been my inspiration ever on this WL !

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