You sung a hundred songs
With beautiful words
And we sat under the tree
The chirping of the birds
But now I realize,
They were all lies.
It looked so beautiful
When everything was calm and cool
But now the days are gone
Your heart turned into stone
In the climate, I felt the heat
And it became harder to breathe
And you made me realize,
That they were all lies.
You told me how you felt
And I had to regret
Coz I made mistakes
Your ego was at stakes
And now I realize,
They were all lies.
You asked me to move on
Like it never happened
But how can I forget
The plans that I had set
My life became a misery
But now it’s a history
Coz you made me realize,
They were all lies.
You told me right
It was just a dream of the night
And the night was gone
So why should I mourn
Now I made my mind
That I shall not be kind
And I have to fight
This battle like a knight
Coz now I realize,
They were all lies.
Yes, I realize
They all were lies.
I thought, I write well
ReplyDeleteThen I came to this lounge
And I thought that all the good writers are here,
But, now I realize
That the world's so big
And the poets are at large,
Coz you made me realize
There are many more whom we have to accommodate in the lounge
And give the highest post,
If they keep writing,
The Way you Wrote!
Now, I realize!
WELCOME TO THE WRITER's LOUNGE!
You have made a Grand Entry ... A very good post ... a poem with touch of old English composition, which is my personal fav ...
Thanks, and keep writing :)
hey naveen welcome to lounge, well i have read his blogs and hes got great talent, well i can assure you, you will improve as a writer here
ReplyDeleteso keep it coming
keep posting and enjoy the experience :)
@tan thanx for such a wonderful welcome..hope to be in touch thru this medium!!
ReplyDelete@jack..thanx bro for motivating me...surely i would learn a lot of things after coming to this place!
ReplyDeleteWelcome !! and Gosh ! this write took my hart away :) !! perfect words, rythm and feel !! waiting to read more from your end
ReplyDeleteI for one cant rhyme my peoms. And hence, I greatly admire those who can rhyme as well as emote through poems. Gr8 work. Welcome to the Lounge. Blog on! :D
ReplyDeleteI like the theme of the poem and i think its the high time i accept that i also enjoy poems like i enjoy prose.
ReplyDeletealthought i found a couple of grammar errors, like: You sang, in the first line looks more appropriate, don't you think?
but then, we are together here to learn and improve, i hope we all do. Welcome in.
@pretty, rashi n .a.
ReplyDeleteThnx a lot..it feels really good when you hear accolades like this!
oh yes..thanx for pointing the errors, hopefully i would make improvements in the coming posts!
born a poet, in this lounge,
ReplyDeletewith words so nice to see,
waiting for more of your lovely words,
welcome to the lounge to thee...
loved it dude, super words!! u made a dashing entrance. i'm a bit late i guess...
sweet poem
ReplyDeletei really like the rhyming words at the end.
if u give it a tune and sing the lines', ur poem is really catchy and great to sing along
welcome to the lounge!