One day we met,
and later we parted..
We met,cause we loved
and parted since love died..
You wanted to be with me
but i knew it won't work out..
you cried,and pleaded to me
i cried 'cause i felt so much guilty..
you tried lots to get me back
I thought it was courage i lacked..
then hell happened,you called me names
said that i played perfect love games...
I was hurt of course,so much by words
for long i could not think of a happy world..
But thanks dear,for showing real you
no longer i regret my being single and free..
after weeks of agony,i finally smiled silently
I finally got the rewards for "praying for peace".
Beautiful poem...Keep up your good work
ReplyDeleteyes... Desperation brings out the real YOU... :)
ReplyDeleteAs usual.. very nice Prats..!!
There's somethin unique in ur poems.... So simple n yet so fascinating..!!
Cheers..!!
Arjun
beautiful poem dear...
ReplyDeletewritten well and amazing u got the rewards fr praying for peace.....that part was really good
thanks Dolphin Dreamz .. kind words keep me moving .. i mean writing ..
ReplyDeletegud poem, Prats! simple yet conveys the message!
ReplyDeletebt jst one point, if da guy was really committed and u meant da world to him, nd u left him! he had a right to b mad didn't he?
jst a questn! its nt so easy to let go of nyone, more so of a person u have luvd wid all ur heart nd hav trusted wid ur life! :)
callin names isnt decent so point taken, though! :P :P :P
Thanks Arjun ,... i indeed write on matters i have seen or gone through .. maybe thats why my writes are so real ..
ReplyDeletenice one prats!
ReplyDeleteLove how the poem elongates every time u scroll.....
ReplyDeleteReally nice....
@Prats: have never seen a more straight forward poetry.. i call this a poem with no strings attached.. :)
ReplyDeletenice straightfwd poem pratsie...
ReplyDeletegood pyramidal structure too! :)
@It was a well earned award Ste .. :)
ReplyDeleteyou answered your own question Maverick ... and thanks Aparna :)
ReplyDeletethanks Anurag :)
ReplyDeleten u said right pink !!
thankoo vinay
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