January 29, 2009

An inspirational sacrifice

He was ushered into the
desolate domicile and
placed on the altar
I took a peep
ceasing the chat
with my lodestar

He laid still with
his upside down
his 8 pack abdomen indiverse shades of brown

His body was torn
apart with ease
I wonder if his
soul had rested
in peace

The sinner stood
sans guilt
for his poach
As I paid my tribute
to the martyr
a Mr.Cockroach

For he had played a part
in making me wise
and I was INSPIRED
by his sacrifice

Word count : 88 words

N.B. A tribute
 to the cockroach that was dissected 7 years ago in my skoolz biology lab for the sake of our studies

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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousThursday, January 29, 2009 8:59:00 PM

    ah what a bright and innovative thought.. kudos!!

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  2. AnonymousThursday, January 29, 2009 9:02:00 PM

    nandini, that was like ur works! so different, yet innovative and out of this world! :)

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  3. Mohita SaxenaThursday, January 29, 2009 9:06:00 PM

    Wow..!!
    Sheer imagination.!!
    Very innovative.
    Relished it completely.
    :)

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  4. I ZaydiThursday, January 29, 2009 9:58:00 PM

    :P it made me remnd alot f thngs... :D nice poem!

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  5. AnonymousFriday, January 30, 2009 12:14:00 AM

    imaginative and innovative and of course interesting !! :D

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  6. nanFriday, January 30, 2009 10:07:00 AM

    the pink orchid
    Vin
    Mohita
    Illusion
    and Prats di

    Thanx a buch for ya comments :)
    Am humbled :)

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  7. AnonymousFriday, January 30, 2009 10:42:00 AM

    Nan, please label ur poem as "inspiration poetry contest" it wil be missed otherwise if someone sorts the writes with label :)

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  8. Ash DFriday, January 30, 2009 10:44:00 AM

    Seriously, one of the most interesting poems that i've read :D

    It's... what do you say, brings a smile onto your face, yet we are talking about the sacrifice of your dear Mr.Cockroach!

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  9. nanFriday, January 30, 2009 12:36:00 PM

    Prats di
    Thanx for that piece of info
    I shall do dat :)

    Ash
    :D
    thanx ;)

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  10. AnonymousSaturday, January 31, 2009 4:53:00 PM

    Wow! A cockroach can really inspire! :)

    I would never thought of something that mundane Amazing, I must say! Keep up the good work!

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  11. nanSaturday, January 31, 2009 7:40:00 PM

    R.V.

    :P he he
    Thanx ;)

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  12. Sandeep BalanSaturday, January 31, 2009 8:59:00 PM

    nan....cant help comment...that was innovation at work...n you managed to capture my attention and had me emotional by the end of it...felt the pain...good one!

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  13. nanSunday, February 01, 2009 7:44:00 AM

    Mala ;)
    Glad u could feel the essence of the write :)

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  14. nanSunday, February 01, 2009 7:45:00 AM

    oops Malan* :P

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  15. AshritaWednesday, February 04, 2009 11:08:00 AM

    I loved it! So different and it conveys the meaning perfectly!

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  16. nanWednesday, February 04, 2009 11:53:00 AM

    Satans Darling
    Thanx for droppin by ;)

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  17. RiverSoulWednesday, February 04, 2009 3:17:00 PM

    Even With the usual twist in the tale which i've come to expect in your works, you never cease to amaze me
    :)
    Nice one
    :)

    Hee hee.
    Poor cockroach
    :(

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  18. nanWednesday, February 04, 2009 6:59:00 PM

    sid
    he he :D

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