January 16, 2009

I promise I will be back ,as soon as possible....

You have been a great inspiration for me.
At times I struggled ,you were the one who supported me.
When all were against me,it was you who was on my side.
When I cried ,you were the only one who soothed me.
I was looking for help and it was you who stood by me.
You always thanked me ,but I owe all my credits to you.
You were annoyed when I spoke against our loved ones.
You have been a friend,guide and a philosopher.
your suggestions always helped me.
A peice of advice was all that I required from you.
I hurted you, made you cry and even sad.
Even then you called me a best friend.
You always want me to be first in life.
You got angry when I wasted my time.
It were you who changed my life.
My life would be incomplete without you.
You scolded me when I was naughty at times.
You helped me,when I was tired.
You accompanied me when I nervous.
It was on your shoulders that I relied much.
I trusted you and you trusted me.
But now everything is gone,
Every one is against me.
But I don't care ,but I do wait only for you.
I am going ,
I am going forever.
Thank you for all that you have done for me.
Thank you for considering me as a best friend.
Kill me,hurt me ,leave me.
But do remember me,
for I remember you as a person who changed my life.
I am going,far and away,
but will back soon.
Do remember me for the rest of your life.
Only thing I can say you now ,
Keep waiting,
I promise I will be back ,as soon as possible.

15 comments:

  1. Heart touching write, ste! Da array of emotions displayed is breathtaking and the details to which u have portrayed da dependence dat one has on his trusted soulmate is wonderful! Cheers! :)

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  2. @Ste: simply beautiful..but now these lines have inspired poetry in me... will come with a reply to it .. in a couple of hours..
    thank you for these lines and an inspiration :)

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  3. ty maverick

    this is one of my oldest poem that i wrte in july august.....never had time for poems ...

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  4. @ Kajal
    U guys do hav a high amount of effeciency! To churn out poems at dis amazing rate is too kewlll! :)

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  5. @Maverick: wait for a couple of hours.. i am sure you will have contribute faster than us,, :D

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  6. The way u described the emotions.. Really good...
    U r damn good with poems....

    And there's a whole new bunch of awesome poets in this lounge... I feel I'm the odd one here... Our lounge simply rocks.. (though i've already said this a hundred times)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  7. give a break !! from saying that u suck at poems ..n in the poem too ;) !! i find it hard to read such long post at a stretch !! nice one though

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  8. nice one ste
    u should be modest that u call urself u suck in poetry

    you should write more such poems and bless us by posting them

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  9. Will wait as long as it takes
    For you are my friend, my mate
    Be back soon please,
    For being with me is your fate :D

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  10. Ste, if you are bad at poetry, then I'll have to invent a whole new word to describe my 'talent'...

    This is your third post I am reading today... and two of them are poems!

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  11. yeah... akansha hit the right idea...! :)

    see i told u ste would have fans of poetry! :)

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  12. ste a heart touching poem...i wld say this to every frnd of mine....god bless u...it really touched my heart deep

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