Come With Me Before I Leave!
Death is on its way,
But before leaving you behind,
All alone on your own,
I've a feeling,
I should return once to you,
All the precious moments,
That you really deserve,
I want to hug you,
Kiss you and embrace you,
Like never before,
So that whenever you see yourself,
in a mirror or in someone's eyes,
It reminds you the love of mine,
The feel of mine,
As i want to live in you,
Yes! I knw i am in you,
But after me i know,
Your life will not stop,
Even i dont want so,
As all i want is just to,
INSPIRE YOU!
-Illusion!
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I am sorry ppl but ever since the competition started my mind is filled with words and I swear words are forcing me to write :$
For more check : http://illsuionplaywords.blogspot.com/
sweet n touching!
ReplyDeletemay words force u more often!
Awww
ReplyDeletea delicate emotional outburst ;)
very very mushy :)
The feel of mine,
ReplyDeleteAs i want to live in you,
Yes! I knw i am in you,
But after me i know,
Your life will not stop,
Even i dont want so,
As all i want is just to,
INSPIRE YOU!
awesome!
captivating and obviously more of emotions ..inpirational ones
fell in love with this one...captivating...totally....this one really touched the strings somewhere deep within...there are some pieces which force you to think after reading...which pull you towards it and make you a part of the narrative...i felt as if these words were coming out of me...n that is an achievement bro...a pat on the back!
ReplyDeleteWow! ( i'm ... shocked ) i thought its nt even worth ... but you people :') thank you ... Thank you all..
ReplyDeleteWell i am thinkng to change the last line i.e
ReplyDeleteINSPIRE YOU!
as
PROTECT YOU!
plzzz comment will it b better or..?
expression never calls for an apology.. it gives you boundless freedom :)
ReplyDeleteyour poetry smells of a soul that's free still voluntarily bound with the threads of love.. :)
PINK ORCHID!
ReplyDeletethank you sooooo much!!
No, damn! I love the inspire me better!
ReplyDeleteI mean why the hell would anyone be sorry for writing something which is sheer delight to read??
*hugs*
M glad you are writing lots... we are getting to read so much nice writes... good one...
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ReplyDeletemuwah for tht
@ Preetty!
thankoooooooooo
Really beautiful, illusion. Loved the last verses best.
ReplyDeletePretty much heartfelt
:)
Good work.
Keep writing.
:)
@ RiverSoul
ReplyDeleteThank you dear!