January 22, 2009

By my window...




From another window,
i saw you standing...
below the window
we once called love..
Its just curtained
as you can see...
same as i bottled
up my feelings...
I too remember
the dreams we wove..
and the stolen kisses
that travelled forth..
I too silently cry
when breeze touch me
'cause they bring
sad memories to me..
I saw you sigh
as you moved on..
but i am still here,
you will never really know!!


A reply to Kajal's poem here

:)

6 comments:

  1. Ahh..!! That was nice..
    While everyone were 'moving on' u showed the other dimension.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  2. @Prats: i second arjun, you brought the other dimension... and i am sighing now...thank you for writing this one prats..really.. )

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  3. i haven't read callie's version yet... but urs is serene! well penned prats! :)

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  4. @Arjun .. yeah that was d intention .. we usually never think of the other person ..

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  5. m glad i could do justice to this thought :) thanks Kajal !!

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