वो रात का मंज़र,
वो चाँद अधूरा सा,
भुलाये नही भूलता, वो साथ अधूरा सा...
वो शरमाई आँखें, वो धीमी हँसी,
कुछ यूँ किया था उनका दीदार अधूरा सा...
वो सर्द हवाएं, वो सुनसान राहें,
चढ़ रहा था हम पर खुमार अधूरा सा...
वो सहमें कदम, वो घबराए से हम,
था उनकी आंखों में मेरा इंतज़ार अधूरा सा...
उस रात की कहानी अब और क्या कहूं...
वो दास्तान अधूरी, वो प्यार अधूरा सा...
वो रात का मंज़र,
वो चाँद अधूरा सा...!!!!
excellent
ReplyDeleteshandar
you put your thought very nicely
so romantic !!
ReplyDeleteMY reaction: Sigh!
ReplyDeletesecond reaction: Picturing the entire thing in my head
third reaction : Tweets, kis ke liye tha? :P
@chirag
ReplyDeletethanks a lot, i am glad u liked it...
@prats
ReplyDeleteyes pretty romantic n i tried my hand fr the first time at hindi poem...so i hope it was gud...
@rashi
ReplyDeleteoh i so wish it was fr someone...but nevertheless i am sure it must have been great scenario to picturise ;) :P
@tweety: wonderful hindi..pretty lines and so expressive... you are great at hindi too shwe.. :)
ReplyDelete@kan
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear...i was afraid i cant do hindi...so i guess i am wrong...
thoughts well put across, though i prefer ur english works...
ReplyDeletei am not very good with hindi, though i intend to try it sometime soon! :D