It was raining...She waited.... at the altar, for him to come...
He waited.... at the border, for the enemy to strike...
PS: The contest may be over... but the inspiration lingers still!! Don't know if this qualifies as a haiku... Will be glad if it does!! Anyway, I was watching a movie when this thought came into my mind... must salute our armed forces for their sacrifices!!
wonderful thought .. pics speak for themselves !!!
ReplyDeleteps : haiku is 3-5-3 or 5-7-5 syllable count pattern ...
pps: syllable is different from words.
search net to know more n keep writing :)
yes it doesnt qualifies as a haiku though and nice attempt neha
ReplyDeletebtw
pretty i guess that description of haiku was from google search :p
and yeah prats
ReplyDeleteu promised me to give me details abt haiku,tanka,haiga
remember ??
i sure learnt all these from searching net... but here i just quoted 2 basic facts abt a haiku !! n i will start the lessons from new year ...
ReplyDeletegood one :) i really liked it.. yeah the inspiration is still there, energy isnt though!
ReplyDeletewell written neha!
ReplyDeleteRain? Where is it?
ReplyDeleteI mean ... It all happened while it was raining? OK, but I did not get wet a bit in it ... more of patriotic feeling and pride for the men in the force ...
Sorry, but would like to get more drenched in pure RAIN!
Hope I was clear in this ...