In a crowd of lingering memories,
I am lonely without you ;
In a crowd of dull today's,
I am searching my yesterday's YOU ;
In the floating crowd of images
have I really lost you ???
I dont have an answer today, reality is may be i have lost her but my heart still doesnt believe it and is still searching for an answer....... hope remains forever i guess
simple and expressive.
ReplyDeletegood work
Hope can torture you if you rely too much on it.
ReplyDeleteIt can save you when you rely on it just right.
I am no saint. I get tortured every day :)
REALLY GOOD WORK ...NICE AND YE U WERE RITE
ReplyDeletenice one !! but hope is a cruel master of hearts .. :)
ReplyDeletethank you all
ReplyDelete@vinisha you are right hope beyond certain level hurts
that was lovely.. hope is always a good thing :)
ReplyDeletelingering memories was a good one, i didnt like the abrupt end though!
ReplyDeleteI am searching my yesterday's YOU
ReplyDeleteI loved this line... People change. We do too but we search for the person we once loved...
It sucks...