December 15, 2008

The Day You Left


It rained the day you left, not the bitter squall of anger but the gentle drops of quiet acceptance.

19 words. Better that! :D


5 comments:

  1. Oh God..!! Fantastic...
    Got deep with 19 words... Gr8...

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  2. loved the message and the depth behind these "19" words :)

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  3. That is a complete story, in just 19 words... a plot, a climax and emotional depth ! Nicely done.

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  4. There comes a time when we are done being sad, done being angry... and you just accept! *Sigh*

    :D

    Loved the acceptance part of it! :)

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