The Writers Lounge: The Day You Left

December 15, 2008

It rained the day you left, not the bitter squall of anger but the gentle drops of quiet acceptance.

19 words. Better that! :D

ArjunMonday, December 15, 2008 9:49:00 AM
Oh God..!! Fantastic...
Got deep with 19 words... Gr8...

Cheers..!!
Arjun
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AnonymousMonday, December 15, 2008 10:59:00 AM
loved the message and the depth behind these "19" words :)
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Abhilasha KrishnanMonday, December 15, 2008 4:33:00 PM
That is a complete story, in just 19 words... a plot, a climax and emotional depth ! Nicely done.
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AnonymousTuesday, December 16, 2008 12:07:00 AM
aha! perfect !! :D
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AnonymousThursday, December 18, 2008 2:35:00 PM
There comes a time when we are done being sad, done being angry... and you just accept! *Sigh*

:D

Loved the acceptance part of it! :)
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