I was entrapped in your Eye
Ever since you were hurt and went through pain..
But now I am free
I am glad your efforts went in Vain..
Why do you hide me away
And never give me my own space..
I know in my presence
You loose the beauty of your lovely face..
Every time you give me vent
I relieve you from the burden of your heart..
I prepare your soul
For a fresh and hopeful start..
However long the tale is
I cut it short in breadth and length..
Don't think of me as a Weakness
I am your Innermost Strength..
touching!!
ReplyDeleteGosh! It's so sweet. Really.
ReplyDeleteI loved the way it ended :)
wow!!... that was realy realy beautiful... very well written... !!! great rhyme too...!!! keep it up... !!!
ReplyDeletethat was such a touching piece...dont think of me as a weakness...i am your innermost strength...was such a nice read..great to have you back here charu...the quality of the posts here keep on going up few notches every single day...way to go!
ReplyDeleteAwesome-ly put.
ReplyDeleteExactly your kinda stuff :)
specifically the way you said that tears make us stronger... so true!