September 26, 2010

Depression.


Emotions
Thoughts
Feelings
Piled up inside
Waiting to burst
All you want is to end it all
Because your too scared and shy to cry
You take the knife ready to bring it all to an end
No one can do anything about it
Life just is a sad story
But,
Why die?
When all you have to do is cry.

Love
Sonshu

P.S: I wrote this one in five minutes randomly because I felt like writing it. :) The picture inspired me =)

9 comments:

  1. ncie poem sonshu it taken out all the pain of a person.

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  2. this shaped poem so honest to address end-of-life issues. There are times life is such despair.

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  3. the most important thing is that u are feeling ease after writing it down or not

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  4. It's great that you just get an idea and write, doing that will always bring a vitality and truth to your writing :)

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  5. lovely sonshu!...similar poem I posted in my blog

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  6. ya sometime sllife seems dark...sometimes it seems funny and absurd.

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  7. The girl in the pic is very beautiful in her own way and so are your words.

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  8. lovely poem...short one but holds a lot of meaning :)

    touched me deeply !

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