March 23, 2010

MEIN TO MARAA HUA HOON

पूचो  न  कुछ  मुझसे  यारों
में तो मरा हुआ हूँ 
जीते ही मार दिया था मुझको
बहुत डरा हुआ था में तो
कमाल की  वक़्त थी वह  जब
तुम और में मिले थे
बेकार लगती थी  सब कुछ
सिवा प्यार की वह बातें
पता ही नहीं था , प्यार होता क्या
तब तक, जब तक में तुझे खो  चुका था
तुम्हारे बिना जीना भी क्या जीना है
अच्छा हुआ, में तो मरा हुआ हूँ

Poocho na kuch Mujse Yaron
Mein to maraa hua Hoon
Jeete hi maar diya ta mujko
Bahut dara hua  ta mein to
Kamaal ki waqt thi wo Jab
Tum aur mein mile the
Bekar lagthi thi sab kuch
Siva pyaar ki woh batein
Pata hi nahi thaa, pyar hota kya
Tab tak, Jab tak mein tujhe ko chukaa thaa
Tumhare bina jina bhi kya jina hai
Achcha hua mein to maraa Hua hoon

3 comments:

  1. Yeh bahut sahi hai! Aapne bahut achche se likha hai! :)
    Lekin,
    "Kamaal ka waqt tha wo jab" aur "Bekar lagta tha sab kuch" hona chahiye.. Haina?

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  2. Hey thats nice n quite painful too !!! but i found few words bit contradictory - like jeete hi maar diya tha mujhko n kamal ki waqt thi wo jab ...I dont know y but i feel there iis something missing in the flow

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  3. Mein bahut dartha tha, isliye mujhe jite hi mardiya tha. Get it! I agree the other line was jinxed! lol I was so inspired by Dead Angel's poem (It was superb!) I badly wanted to write something. Hence the result. Thanks for your kind words.

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