March 28, 2010

Human Torture

Hostile towards me
Unaffected by pain
Mercy I implored
Anger I see
Neglecting my plea

Tormenting my soul
Obnoxiously they stole
Right to live
Thoughts of freedom
Ugly hurting beatings
Rage etched deeply
End I beg

Posted @ Acrostic Only


  1. This is very abstract and also an interesting take on the prompt, but my question is, who is doing all this torturing?

  2. @amias

    hmm a good question...when i wrote this, i was considering a fellow human being torturing another one...maybe it didnt picture out as that...


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