March 10, 2010

Child Abuse

Cruel insidious act
Having no remorse
Ignoring pitiful cries
Lack of civility
Destroy budding life


A sick mind
Blatantly causing harm
Upon trusting child
Senseless brutal crime
Evading detection often

For Acrosticonly

9 comments:

  1. You are so right Saras .. and it seems to never stop. You hit the nail on the head ... Hurting our children is truly destroying our future.

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  2. very very true!

    am done with this prompt Saras

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  3. you have looked at this from the child's angle...write another one from the abuser's(what makes him do it)...they will go well together

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  4. True, and yet these sick people just never know how much it affects the child. :C

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  5. Striking ..just bang on...!!!

    n in the form of acrostic... Loved the attempt :)

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  6. @Amias
    Thank you.
    @Amity
    Thank you
    @Nalini
    Yes, I will try.
    @Nic
    A perverted mind knows no civility or shame.They are devoid of feelings.
    @Urvashi
    I am glad you liked it. I love Acrostics.

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  7. A sick mind...that's the best way to describe child abuse. Great poem.

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  8. @Leo
    Thanks
    @Ofira
    I am glad you liked it.

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