March 5, 2010

Child Abuse

Childhood lost, existence vaining
Home unsafe, no shelter
I wonder why, how
Lust only I see
Dreams unborn been shattered

Affection I had sought
Brutal hands I loved
Unreal seems the reality
Smiling, mocking my pain
Endless turmoil, hollow within.

Posted @ Acrostic Only

12 comments:

  1. @nabs

    thanks alot...WL seems to be regaining back it old fervour... :) ;) aftr all i started off from this place...met u all from this place...

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  2. Tweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeety, this is soooo beautiful re..

    Its so deep..! I'm speechless.

    So damn happy to see such depth in your acrostic now! :) U've improved so much! :)

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  3. @leo

    thnkuuuuuuuu sooooo much leo...

    i have improved all thanks to u...thanks fr being my teacher...

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  4. Very well said dear...:)

    I salute you for a job well done!

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  5. A very nice take from the point of view of the victim! Excellent attempt worthy of praise. Kudos.

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  6. Great poem, almost has a battle within feel to it..how can I love the one that's abusing me.

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  7. Great attempt on the prompt...!!

    Perfect..!!!

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