Childhood lost, existence vaining
Home unsafe, no shelter
I wonder why, how
Lust only I see
Dreams unborn been shattered
Affection I had sought
Brutal hands I loved
Unreal seems the reality
Smiling, mocking my pain
Endless turmoil, hollow within.
Posted @ Acrostic Only
ouch.....speechless!
ReplyDeleteWB sweetheart :)
This is deep, and so true!
ReplyDelete@nabs
ReplyDeletethanks alot...WL seems to be regaining back it old fervour... :) ;) aftr all i started off from this place...met u all from this place...
Tweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeety, this is soooo beautiful re..
ReplyDeleteIts so deep..! I'm speechless.
So damn happy to see such depth in your acrostic now! :) U've improved so much! :)
@amias
ReplyDeletethnks dear...
@leo
ReplyDeletethnkuuuuuuuu sooooo much leo...
i have improved all thanks to u...thanks fr being my teacher...
wow..nice one
ReplyDelete@vidya
ReplyDeletethnks dear...
Very well said dear...:)
ReplyDeleteI salute you for a job well done!
A very nice take from the point of view of the victim! Excellent attempt worthy of praise. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, almost has a battle within feel to it..how can I love the one that's abusing me.
ReplyDeleteGreat attempt on the prompt...!!
ReplyDeletePerfect..!!!