February 16, 2010

Brotherhood

Blessed this relationship is
Remains divine bond this
Open arms, open minds
Treasured love from start
Hearts might be separate
Envisioning so much alike
Respecting each other so
Hampered ways open up
On their working together
One long staying relation
Dear to both souls

Acrostic Only


4 comments:

  1. Leo..did is rlly awsum..hope dis relation always remain so blessed..nice write it is..keep goin like dis..enjoying yr acrostic rain..:):)

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  2. This is an intriguing poem and certainly a strong, powerful ode to brotherhood. Wonderful acrostic : )

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  3. Brotherhood is dear to all souls... only that some of us deny and avoid facing it...

    The need of the hour!

    Welled penned, Mr. TAP :P

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  4. I was wondering what your take on this would be ... yes, brotherhood is dear to all souls, when it's brotherhood. Good take on prompt.

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