The built up walls,
came crashing down..
the love that held them,
was no where to be found.
bricks of my trust,
you promised to care,
when hard times hit,
you were no where..
exposed to the icy stares
i stiffled my silent cries.
i will not waste my tears
however hard you might try.
came crashing down..
the love that held them,
was no where to be found.
bricks of my trust,
you promised to care,
when hard times hit,
you were no where..
exposed to the icy stares
i stiffled my silent cries.
i will not waste my tears
however hard you might try.
the walls will be up soon
cemented well to stand tall
and i will fill myself again
with hopeful smiles and charm.
Inspired from the two lines of Ana's poem .. sorry for stealing gal ...
:) good one :)
ReplyDeletedis is again wondrful...i like tht end wall will b up soon..
ReplyDeleteI liked these lines the most:
ReplyDeletei will not waste my tears
however hard you might try . .
thanks all ! it was jst an impulsive write ...
ReplyDeletePratsie, you do know the way to my thoughts :)
ReplyDeletewow...that is sweet, emotional and so so real..
ReplyDeletegreat going prats
nice! luvd dis one, Prats! tc! :)
ReplyDeletem glad YOU liked it Ana.... happy !
ReplyDeletethanks all for the nice words here :)
Hi PS,
ReplyDeleteit should be like this isn't it?: 'in good and bad times, we should still be together', it's not that when bad times come, he will abandon you?
very emotional one!
good morning dear!
:)