The Three words... Just three words... but he had to wait three years for just these three words...
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" I love you.." , he said.------------------------------
She was silent. He continued, " I'm not asking you to love me. But, I'm just informing you that I love you."
She was walking in the rain. No umbrella... No raincoat... She just wanted herself to be in the rain. Suddenly, she heard a voice ...
" Hi.." , he wished her, brushing his wet long hair not to fall on his face.
" Well... I just saw you and thought of speaking with you."
" about what?", she asked.
" about anything... or may be .. nothing... but just wanted to talk...", he said.
"Do you like walking in the rain?", she asked playing with the raindrops.
"I like walking with you.." he told her.
She was silent... silent for the rest of their walking...
It was her birthday and he called her. She expected a birthday wish from him. But he said, " I love You"..
Later in the afternoon, he gave her a love letter. She read it and pointed out 7 grammatical errors and 5 spelling mistakes.
They were standing at the bus stop. It was a cool winter evening.
He said, " I don't know. There are a some things in life which you cant do by making a choice. They just happen."
She asked," What will u do if i die?"
" I will still love you..."
She was silent...
" You want a hot cup of coffee?" , he asked pointing to a shop on the other side of the road.
" Of course.." , she said.
He was crossing the road with two cups in both the hands and suddenly, a lorry hit him....
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She leaned forward and told him, in a soft but firm voice: I Love You...
Three words... Just three words... but he had to wait three years for these just three words...
A drop from her eye had fallen onto his photo... and she was still silent...looking at his picture..Three words... Just three words... but he had to wait three years for these just three words...
The Writer blogs at Thoughts Aloud
awesome post. loved it! touched my heart.
ReplyDeleteThis is sooooooooooooo emotional.. but lovely..
ReplyDeleteThis piece really spoke to my heart!
ReplyDeleteVery touching.... love is beautiful :)....
ReplyDeletethank you :)
Real shock value. One word, in your story, changed her world.
ReplyDelete@Pooja Mahimkar: I've written it especially for girls. The kind of behaviour they exhibit has made me write this story. Thanks for loving it..
ReplyDelete@Meow: Why should emotional stories be tragic? Thanks for reading it..
@Bobbi: I'm happy for my story speaking to your heart.. Thanks for the comment..
@stardust: Yeah.. Love is beautiful.. Thanks to you too..
@Varun: Shock value? .. thanks for reading it...
[i]He was crossing the road with two cups in both the hands and suddenly, a lorry hit him....[/i]
ReplyDeletenever expected it there, so the shock.
@Varun: Yeah.. that one word has changed her world.
ReplyDeleteoh god it really vry emotional n b'ful story..welcome 2 lounge..:)
ReplyDelete@Vidisha: Thanks a lot..
ReplyDelete.. beautifully written! :)
ReplyDeletegood one....kinda sad though. I guess evry1 will connect with it in someway or the other
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