November 21, 2009

55 fiction - Amicable!

Tears splashed from her eyes as she went to the counter to collect the final bill. doctors rushed past her,echos of hospital blues dominated her senses.She sat on the floor and looked upwards.None of those present noticed her state.A stray Pup came and licked her feet.


6 comments:

  1. @ freelancer - I wrote a post a couple of days back too bro!
    But I have lost my readership base here at WL largely :P
    he he he...
    hows u?
    whats up with life?

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  2. Nice one, but why does she look upward? as in in a spiritual way, or just in a bleak sense of loss?

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