October 28, 2009

Agar tu kahe...


Inspired from this poem by mads

Tanha sab hi hai yahan,
aisa main bhi jaanta hoon,
par jab tak ho sake,kya
saath tere chal sakta hoon?

tu khamosh rahe agar to kya
aankhon ko padhna jaanta hoon,
tu na chaahe mujhe to kya,
tere aansoo ponchna jaanta hoon.

vaada nahi har pal paas rehne ka
par dil me hamesha rakh sakta hoon
maut ke baad bhi kareeb rahoon,
pyaar ban tere man me bas sakta hoon.


I know its not so good .. but i dnt know why i could not write beyond this ...


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10 comments:

  1. thanks Ste .. but i know wen i write good, wen not .. but i edited it .. like it more now !

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  2. heyy..u did it..gud 1..jus superb n awsumm..:)

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  3. its not good? gosh sexy, did yu bang ur head sumwhere?
    its fantastic!

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  4. rulane ka zimmedaree utha li hai kya WL waalon ko? :P

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  5. this was a sweet post ! not a sad one :P !! ur understanding is bit off tume these days !

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  6. can't understand this Prats, sorry dear!

    :)

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