October 28, 2009

Agar tu kahe...


Inspired from this poem by mads

Tanha sab hi hai yahan,
aisa main bhi jaanta hoon,
par jab tak ho sake,kya
saath tere chal sakta hoon?

tu khamosh rahe agar to kya
aankhon ko padhna jaanta hoon,
tu na chaahe mujhe to kya,
tere aansoo ponchna jaanta hoon.

vaada nahi har pal paas rehne ka
par dil me hamesha rakh sakta hoon
maut ke baad bhi kareeb rahoon,
pyaar ban tere man me bas sakta hoon.


I know its not so good .. but i dnt know why i could not write beyond this ...


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10 comments:

  1. The Solitary WriterWednesday, October 28, 2009 11:55:00 AM

    hey who said its nt good
    its really good yar

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  2. PS the PratsieWednesday, October 28, 2009 12:06:00 PM

    thanks Ste .. but i know wen i write good, wen not .. but i edited it .. like it more now !

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  3. Mads...Wednesday, October 28, 2009 12:41:00 PM

    heyy..u did it..gud 1..jus superb n awsumm..:)

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  4. FreelancerWednesday, October 28, 2009 12:59:00 PM

    its not good? gosh sexy, did yu bang ur head sumwhere?
    its fantastic!

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  5. PS the PratsieWednesday, October 28, 2009 2:02:00 PM

    Thanks Mads .. i am glad i cud pen it finally .. :)

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  6. PS the PratsieWednesday, October 28, 2009 2:03:00 PM

    watever FL :P

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  7. hWednesday, October 28, 2009 5:41:00 PM

    rulane ka zimmedaree utha li hai kya WL waalon ko? :P

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  8. PS the PratsieWednesday, October 28, 2009 6:32:00 PM

    this was a sweet post ! not a sad one :P !! ur understanding is bit off tume these days !

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  9. AmityThursday, October 29, 2009 8:07:00 AM

    can't understand this Prats, sorry dear!

    :)

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  10. AnonymousThursday, October 29, 2009 11:19:00 AM

    good one dear!!

    great job..

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