He came out from his coaching class. It was raining heavily. He was worried and anxiously looking for convience to go home safely. Suddenly a car stopped driving by a gorgeous girl. He requested for Lift. She agreed. On a specific place he stopped the car and said " Thank You so much , Buhbyee Aunty "
P.S.: It's my first attempt on 55 Fiction...how is it??
:D :D Bubbyeee Aunty is the highlight :) loved it
ReplyDeleteShort n sweet...
ReplyDeleteThe end was really unexpected... Bhbyee Aunty..??!! :P
Tres bon, monsieur! Au Revoir.
ReplyDeleteheyy..gud attempt wid a funny ending..:)
ReplyDeletenice :) Keep trying !!
ReplyDeletereally cute!!
ReplyDeletegood try!
@Meaow
ReplyDeleteThank you :D
@ Urvashi
ReplyDeleteThanks to u too dear :P
@ Saraswathan
ReplyDeleteI m not able to understood wt u said...Sorry :(
btw Thanks for commenting :)
@ for u from me
ReplyDeletethank u...i will write 55 Fiction again :)
@ Prats
ReplyDeleteyeah i will keep trying...Thanks for comments :)
@ Shradhaa
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :)
hehe...buhbye aunty lol...
ReplyDeleteand i would love to thank you to post 55friction i wanted to read one since a long time but there were no new posts on it... so thanks a lot :D
He requested for Lift.
ReplyDeleteThat means he was not driving.
On a specific place he stopped the car .
That sounds like he was driving..i knw u meant he asked the girl to stop the car.
spell check please
so last line meant that the gorgeous girl was an aunty?
somehow didnt get the context :)
@ Pooja..
ReplyDeletereally?? btw Thanks to u too dear for ur chweet comment :)
@ h
ReplyDeleteThanks for ur genuine comments :)
i'll try my best to write something better..
how can gorgeous girl be auntie in the end? :)
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